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チャプター 5: ページ 011
チャプター 5: ページ 011
ページ情報 公開日: 2018/07/14
コメンタリー コメント日付: 2018/08/11
The interaction between Rock and Roll on this page was written after I did a double-take on the previous pages, specifically with Roll having acted out recklessly by running off to flank her enemy without enough warning despite spotting for Rock at the time.
In the first draft, the two simply gave a thumbs up to each other. I didn't like it because it seemed to allow Roll to get away with more than she should, so I decided to give some pushback delivered by Rock that worked as some banter beween the two. While Roll still 'wins' by her decision, I at least wanted to show Rock showing some push-back and not always in agreement with her.
The interaction between Rock and Roll on this page was written after I did a double-take on the previous pages, specifically with Roll having acted out recklessly by running off to flank her enemy without enough warning despite spotting for Rock at the time.
In the first draft, the two simply gave a thumbs up to each other. I didn't like it because it seemed to allow Roll to get away with more than she should, so I decided to give some pushback delivered by Rock that worked as some banter beween the two. While Roll still 'wins' by her decision, I at least wanted to show Rock showing some push-back and not always in agreement with her.
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